domingo, 16 de abril de 2017

Literary essay for English

I used to think...

I used to think that a literary essay about any book would be very difficult. I thought it would be like this because thought the 1st semester I figured out I had trouble writing down my ideas on paper. This really worried me because I thought I would not be able to make my ideas clear and I in my opinion I had some pretty good ideas. This also got me worried because this semester I am aiming to 1-up my grades in all my classes. And lastly this worried me because this would be the major summative for the 3 quarter and I set a goal for myself to work hard and focus in all my classes.

Now I think...

Now I think that I got way better at writing. I had two people correct my work for this project because I was very nervous. And after I read my work I was really surprised, I did not think I could manage to do such high quality work. This made me even happier when I found out that I got a 6/7 in my Islamic paragraph that I managed to complete in 20 minuets. I believe that with the extra work that I put in during the break, really helped me to build better essays and paragraphs.



Celebrating my writing...

"This also means that Napoleon is brainwashing them and with the products that the animals create, he sells them, so again Napoleon used the animals to agree with him and let the pigs make trading actions with the humans, this is really important because without the trading with the humans, the animals would have never finished the windmill, and thats not all, they wouldn't have all of the materials that they needed to survive." I believe this quote shows my growth as a writer really well. I like this quote because I really enjoy the way that I use the word "Brainwash" in my sentence because, it describes what is happening to the animals and its a strong word in my opinion to use in this context. This also prevents me from repeating the same words over and over again.



Evaluation and discussion of cover art from the novel...

I believe that this activity really helped to find the theme that I was gonna talk about in this essay. This really helped me because the cover of the book could show the secret hatred and distance that the animals had with the pigs that was caused with the constant manipulation of their ideals throughout the book.


Shoutouts...

I would like to thank my sister for correcting my work, she had some really great comments that improved my writing a lot. She also helped me notice the constant grammatical errors found in my essay and I believe that without her I wouldn't have created such a good essay. And lastly I would like to thank my friend Caio, he helped me a lot with fixing up my introduction and without him my introduction would have been straight up trash.









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