quarta-feira, 7 de junho de 2017

The Guilt Of Retreat

Crafting this moment in my story was surprisingly easy, I just had to think about war. This moment came in my mind quickly but writing it down was completely different. It took me a few tries to write it the way I wrote it in my final draft because I was trying to make it drastic but making it remain historically accurate. Then I decided to kill the captain since he could bring some difficulty to writing the rest of the story. So if I make the captain tell a story it would seem natural since entertaining soldiers when the fire of guns calmed down would be necessary to keep the soldiers morale up. Also since snipers took a major part in trench warfare, if I kill the captain it would bring action to the story.

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